Friday, 23 June 2017

alliteration doc

Walt to use alliteration this week we are learning alliteration we were doing similes and alliteration I enjoyed making my alliteration on an app called Spark
WALT: describe a picture by showing not telling
Battle of Princeton - Wikipedia

Show me

Gun shots
flying past my ears

Planes dropping bombs
Explosions on the ground people falling to the ground

Felt  nervous
If I would get through war

My legs had goose bumps

WALT: Describe a moment in time using your senses using the show not tell table you created yesterday.

Choose your goal from your writing check list - write it below
To use alliteration

Thursday, 22 June 2017

alliteration dlo

walt use alliteration we have been doing dlo on alliteration our teacher said we were doing alliteration in our writing I enjoyed doing the alliteration

Friday, 16 June 2017

show not tell

walt1 describe showing not telling I've been using a new sight doing writing the staff went to a meeting and explained a new app and you can write on it I enjoyed doing it because it was a new app dark stormy night

Thursday, 15 June 2017

similes dlo

Walt smiles we have been using a new program called Spark the teacher went to a meeting and learned a new app our teacher showed us her one I have enjoyed learning a new app

Tuesday, 13 June 2017

right place right time online

Walt be right place right time
we have been as a class getting ideas about right place right time online
our class did an activity about positive digital footprint
I enjoyed making the Google drawing