Hello Goodbye Poem

Hello Goodbye Poem

Hello, dad waking me up at 8:00 am in the morning so I can actually get to school.

Goodbye sleep-ins and peacefully waking up to the sounds of birds chirping.

Hello, finally seeing my friends and going outside not just for a run in the early morning.

Goodbye, the late nights and all of the fizzy drinks.

hello six hours of school five days a week

Hello six hours of school for five days a week.

reflection on the past year.

What was my most successful moment

Getting into the A grade for west coast basketball.

 A Lesson I have learnt 

How to make banana choc chip muffins.

What is your family's best milestone

Moving house

How has my last year been?

My last year has been amazing because we had a William pike challenge,

West coast basketball and even moving houses.

individual anzac writing.

The engine roars, as we approach the beach the bullets fly past the carrier when all of a sudden the ramp falls down and I jump off the side waist-deep in the sea,   with my best friend to my side with blood streaming down his face I try and stop the bleeding but it's too late He's dead. I get behind cover and try and take a shot but the machine gun shoots my helmet right off, I flank around and get a shot, but there were enemy soldiers watching it so I sneak across and get my bayonet and charge and get one, so I have a shot on the machine gunner and “Boom” we push forward we have the high ground and we continue to push forward and get to there trenches and It's empty they have retreated and we take control of Gallipoli.

quick write

Ding’’ the doorbell rings, I go to answer it, but an elephant charges through the door and says “hello hows your day”. I'm speechless an elephant that can talk. I say, did you book a room? But I think to myself why would an elephant book a room, when suddenly “yes I did for eight people thanks, number 4.





we had been sent an image, we had to write for 20 minutes about the image and this is what I wrote.

Archie Term reflection

alliteration doc

Walt to use alliteration this week we are learning alliteration we were doing similes and alliteration I enjoyed making my alliteration on an app called Spark

Monday

WALT: describe a picture by showing not telling

Sense	Tell	Show me
Heard	Gun shots	flying past my ears
Saw	Planes dropping bombs	Explosions on the ground people falling to the ground
wonderd	survive Felt  nervous	If I would get through war My legs had goose bumps

Wednesday

WALT: Describe a moment in time using your senses using the show not tell table you created yesterday.

Choose your goal from your writing check list - write it below

To use alliteration

alliteration dlo

walt use alliteration we have been doing dlo on alliteration our teacher said we were doing alliteration in our writing I enjoyed doing the alliteration

show not tell

walt1 describe showing not telling I've been using a new sight doing writing the staff went to a meeting and explained a new app and you can write on it I enjoyed doing it because it was a new app

similes dlo

Walt smiles we have been using a new program called Spark the teacher went to a meeting and learned a new app our teacher showed us her one I have enjoyed learning a new app

scooter argument

Hi I am telling you why scooters at paroa school shouldn’t be banned My most important reason is it is good for your health. It will help you to become fitter. And it helps you get leg muscles so you can run faster and scooter faster. Another point is scooter riding helps you to take risks so you get more confident. When you learn new tricks you get more confident and can learn more. Some tricks you could learn are Tailwhips, Briflip and Bunny hops. 3. Finally Having fun you can ride and do jumps and tricks and have fun Friendship you can play with your friends Entertaining you can do races and fun stuff

 my walt is to learn about arguments
Iv'e been doing arguments about why scooters at paroa school
I enjoyed writing this argument about why scooters shouldn't be ban at paroa school
If felt remembering to put all the capital letters in challenging
my teacher came up with a plan for us to do why scooters at paroa school shouldn't be ban. we write on a sheet all the ideas and simaler words for your ideas

maui and the sun animation

My little garden

10 ways to say said