Monday, 19 September 2016

room 5 glacier camp

3 comments:

  1. Hi Archie,

    Great recount it was really clear.

    To be BTB remember to put capital letters.

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  3. Hi Archie I liked the way you done a clear background color so you could see the writing.
    Next step you could do capitol letter for I.

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