alliteration doc

Walt to use alliteration this week we are learning alliteration we were doing similes and alliteration I enjoyed making my alliteration on an app called Spark

Monday

WALT: describe a picture by showing not telling

Sense	Tell	Show me
Heard	Gun shots	flying past my ears
Saw	Planes dropping bombs	Explosions on the ground people falling to the ground
wonderd	survive Felt  nervous	If I would get through war My legs had goose bumps

Wednesday

WALT: Describe a moment in time using your senses using the show not tell table you created yesterday.

Choose your goal from your writing check list - write it below

To use alliteration

alliteration dlo

walt use alliteration we have been doing dlo on alliteration our teacher said we were doing alliteration in our writing I enjoyed doing the alliteration

show not tell

walt1 describe showing not telling I've been using a new sight doing writing the staff went to a meeting and explained a new app and you can write on it I enjoyed doing it because it was a new app

similes dlo

Walt smiles we have been using a new program called Spark the teacher went to a meeting and learned a new app our teacher showed us her one I have enjoyed learning a new app

right place right time online

Walt be right place right time
we have been as a class getting ideas about right place right time online
our class did an activity about positive digital footprint
I enjoyed making the Google drawing

how to make a blog post on google drawing

walt 
I am learning to embed a code on google slides drawing screncastify
I have been learning to teach people how to post a google drawing to the blog
I started doing a slide for it then we decided to do a screencastify

scooter argument

Hi I am telling you why scooters at paroa school shouldn’t be banned My most important reason is it is good for your health. It will help you to become fitter. And it helps you get leg muscles so you can run faster and scooter faster. Another point is scooter riding helps you to take risks so you get more confident. When you learn new tricks you get more confident and can learn more. Some tricks you could learn are Tailwhips, Briflip and Bunny hops. 3. Finally Having fun you can ride and do jumps and tricks and have fun Friendship you can play with your friends Entertaining you can do races and fun stuff

 my walt is to learn about arguments
Iv'e been doing arguments about why scooters at paroa school
I enjoyed writing this argument about why scooters shouldn't be ban at paroa school
If felt remembering to put all the capital letters in challenging
my teacher came up with a plan for us to do why scooters at paroa school shouldn't be ban. we write on a sheet all the ideas and simaler words for your ideas